Monday, December 5, 2011

Fall, By: Daisy

In Fall I love to jump in leaves
that's what makes me very pleased

I love the way the wind blows
that's what makes my hair go
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  1. AnonymousDecember 5, 2011 at 7:44 AM

    Daisy- I love the feeling of my hair blowing in the wind! The fall air is so crisp and refreshing after a long hot summer:)

    Excellent use of rhyme- very poetic and creative<3

    Mrs. Hall

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    1. Mrs. Hall's Classroom WritersMarch 28, 2012 at 8:23 AM

      I love the way you deseribed fall.you did it very well. I thingk you should be a perfeshenl pome writer love sweetcakes

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