The mother lays the egg. The father and mother keep the egg warm. The mother goes out to sea; when the mother is out at sea the father is keeping the egg warm. The mother is finding food for the chick. While the mother is still out at sea the chick hatches. The father keeps the egg warm by putting it under a little flap under its belly. The mother returns from sea and gives the chick food by barfing it up! yuck. When the chick is a little bit older the mother and father both go out to sea to find food. And they all return well not all of them.
And they all lived happily ever after well most of them did.
Tulip, I really enjoyed the humor you used in this piece of writing!
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