There was a wild hores . And all she ate was grass and leaves . There was a big strom. She wonderd which way it was coming from? Then the storm came. She had to find shelter! The thunder was LOUD!!! She finly found a tree and went under to take a nap.The river grew deeper and deeper.
The wind hald. The hard rain grew longer until it wus only springcols. The wind grew softer and softer.
She awoke from the britnis.There wus a ... RANBOE it was just spricling a littel... She wus SOOOO
tird that she fell over and fell asleep.
THE END
We liked how you put strings of actions in your story, capital letters and end marks to make it easy to read, and the word RAINBOW in all capitals. Awesome story!
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