Thursday, December 4, 2014

A Good Man By: Dre

  Created on`          
 ‘’I am fred  and  I am going to the zoo.’’
 ’And I saw a nice man his name was Mike’’.
‘’He gave me $.’’But  he has to pay
The Bills to this lady known as $
Lover’’. But her real name is Susun.’’
‘’And she is upsest with $
and  he had no money so I gave him
back the money and everybody lived
happey ever after.’’ ’’Than the next day
I WENT TO LEGO LAND I  do not want
Tell anather  story so goodbye.’’


Scaredy Mouse By: Elliot


 This is mouse,
a
cute little guy.

The cat is not so cute.

…But his babies are adorable.

And then one day he thought he would “take a walk.”

So he did and then that cat came along.
Cat asked, “so mouse what are you doing?”
“You’re not going to eat me?”
“Of course not.”
“I was going to get a cookie.”
‘’Can I come with you?”
“Sure.”

THE END.

Don't Walk Away From Your Parents By: Zachary

Tiger and his parents came from India and went to
Japan. At Japan Tiger saw a mouse. Mom  and Dad  “look where are you” ? Here. Ahhhhhh ! a bee I have to run “I’m scared. “Where am I “mom dad
where are you.”Its getting dark I need to find
shelter.  “I see a camp site “hello “ who is that “me
its your cozen Tigy”well Im lost lets get my mom
and dad. “Tiger where are your parents “I’m lost
“lets go find them. I see them mom dad”weve

been looking for you”so have I.

Miky and His Friends By: Braydon

Hi my name is Miky.  and every  day at  reces  I  play with   My frends .
But when I go home  I  ride my  bike .  athter  I  ride   My   bike.
I  wach TV . the next day of  school  it was  Friday . I   stayed  at  my 
Grama  and   grampa .  I  envited  my  frends  over  to  my  house .
Then  the  weekend   was  over  .I   went  back   to  school.  Thar  was  a  new  stewdent  .   he  buled  me  and   my  fr ends . the  next  day  he  did  itD
Again . then  I  told   him    it  is  not  nice  to  builey . enthen   he
Said  yor  write  .  enthen  they  became  frends.



THE END

The Bully By: JR


One day in the tawn sam and jr  were playing in the old  house and thin tom came. tom the bully  he makes fun ofus.the next day when tom was being mine dad came dawn stares and dad SEID stop tom ! thin me and tom became  friends.

Billy and the Annoying Pig By: Mason


Billy and the annoying pig day billy sall a pig and he piked it up and said I am going to take it no said his friend yes he said well he took it home and it was very very very very anoying he said I can’t take it he said  I am takeing it back. I am so happy that I got rid of it. well his friend said I am not happy that you got rid of it well i wanted to get rid of it so I did. Then billy sall a dog and it was very very very very very very very very nice.Then he sall a dinosaur and it was very very very very very very very very mean so I am going to take it home and I will be abole to relax  the end.

Poor DEER by: Ainsley

Poor  DEER
  On a beautiful day deer got sick his friends  came and said
“can deer play”
“ no because he is  sick.”  So owl chipmunk rabbit  skunk left that day they  were  sad. The next day deer was better he  went to find his friends. He asked to play but his friends said
“no! you are sick”

“ nu uh” so he went to find his new friend’s turtle and beaver they could play. They played tag and hide away it was fun then deer’s other friend’s came and They said to deer you are grouse’’. right before they left they spit. deer’s mom and dad came and said go away know okay’’.  When deer grew up he told little ones  never to bully yes sir said the kids’’.  by now said deer’’.         THE END.

Going on a Picnic By: Brilee

“Oh hi. Do you know what me and my family are doing today? You don’t. Well I will tell you we are going on a pick nick. Do you want to come? You do then get your stuff and let’s go I’ll tell you there names the 18 month old one his name is Braxton the other ones name is Bryson he is 5 years old. My moms name is Steph but you call her Mrs. Enyeart she is 41 years old my dads name is Brian but you call him Mr. Enyeart . Do you want to know what is in the pick nick basket? You do k. ham and cheese sandwichs’s PBJ chips cheese it ‘s
strawbaires watermelen gold fish mak and cheez pop corn cheez blue baires and apples friad apples with sinimin ! are you ready to go ? ok lets go !wate !!! I fergot the basket ! ok I got all the stuff are you shir ? yes I ‘m shir . ok are you shir your shir yes. Ok are you shir your . yes now lets go rite now my arm is herting from holding all of this food .Ok ok lets go miss . kraby pants . ha no one calls me miss. Crabby pants or they get hert real hert  . ha gys I fond the perfiket plas in the maik forist  yammmy that was so good lets get back be for mom yels at us


the End or is it

by Brilee Enyeart

Ava the Nice Girl By: Dixie

There was a girl named Ava. Ava was a girl who was a nice girl. There was a bully his name was Dave. Dave bulled Ava. Ava stued up and said ‘’you need to STOP being a bully. Do you want friends? ‘’ ‘’I I . I will not be a bully.’’ Thank you. Said Ava. Dave played and didn’t stele the ball.


THE END

Ella and Her Book By: Citlali


 Ella loved her book.She loved the words the pictures but mosly the title.Every day she said the title.’But one day her mom said you have to throw that book away.”No said Ella. But one day she said ok. So she throuy away the book and every wone was happy every wone epsec for Ella.She was the sades mouse ever to live in the world.She was very but very sad.So one day she deside to make bad thinns.She talk bad to her mom and dad.One day her grama took her to the mall.Her grama bot her a beautiful dres but she was not happy.The next day was her birthday but she was not happy not even with her gifts.When the party was over she  ran to the bed and nobody ever sall her ever agen not even her perents.Ha Ha Ha Ha!!!!The end

Ava and Alex By: Kadence

..Ava and allex

One day there was a little girl named ava.
Ava was painting a pitcer sodenoly a boy Named allex tooked  her  paint brush.  He mest up her picter. She was sad.  She didn,t say enythag she just  Walked quitly out the door.  The next day ava was swing allex  Push her off the swing.now she was mad. She was cring.She went home that she was getting buled for a week her parens were upset .
‘’her’’parens sed to her tomarow you needed
to tell him that you need to stop bulling me.

Then you ask him if he has any friend’s if he said no then ask to be his friend and play with him and you will be best friend’s. And they lived happily ever after. The End.

Nice at Dance By: Haley

One day Sophie went to dance  with her friend’s
Sarah ,Meagen, Ava ,and ,Emma.
They went to dance practice all Sophies friend’s
Were there for 30 minutes at hiphop.
They had alot of fun Emma and Ava were tierd they had to sit down for a little bit. Then every body sat down for a wile and had a snack Sophie and Meagen had cracker’s  “thoes were good” said Meagen. Entil Meagen pusheted Sophie
‘’Owch’’ said Sophie then Sarah came to help ‘’thank you’’ said Sophie. Then Ava came she said
‘’are you ok yeah’’ Sophie said ‘’but my arm hert’s a little.’’ And all the friends came to help I feel better now said Sophie ‘’I am sorry I pusheted you’’ said
Meagen ‘’I am never going to push you agien can we be friends yes I am happy now lets dance some more I love to dance’’ said sophie then all the auther girls came to dance ‘’I love to dance to’’ said  Emma and all the girls were so happy they loved to dance from now on. The End.  

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Viter helps the earth. By: London

Lily always throws away her water bottle. If Lily sole a water bottle she would pick it up and throw it away. Then viter moved into the town. She didn’t throw away her water bottle. Also viter was in Lily’s class. Viter  said I don’t need to help the earth.  Lily said yes you do. Helping the earth is inporton. So viter throws away her water bottle.If  viter sole a water bottle she would pick it up and throw it away. Now viter and Lily were friends and when the bell ringed viter and Lily would walk together.                                                                                                    

Emma and Her Best Friends By: Kami

One day Emma waked up with a smile on her face It was the first day of school her Mother called her Down for breakfast. She had Pancakes with Charies on top. Then she was Sooo exited for school  that she Couldn’t bush her teeth . When she got to school she  Couldn’t
bush her teeth when she got to school has Bumping into Kayla &  Beth they were exited to. They said’ ‘do you want to be my friends? I said yes .When they got to class we meet the Teacher  her Name was Miss Bell. she was very nice. She is from Manchester .The girl that sat next to me was very
Very very very mean. but the next day we  became
Friends            THE END  

Erika and the Blue Headband By: Noelle

One day Erika was walking to school. She was so exited. She wants to meet her new friends and her teacher. The next day she meet Emily Jason Emma and Mike. Her teacher was very nice his name is Mr.Walt and Mrs. Walt they are very nice. She plays with them every day. She always were her blue head band she were it to church she were it to school. And her mom said were a different head band were your pink head band you always where that head band. I love my blue head band.  I got that blue head band from my grandma. so I where it every day. You were it  want to where my red head band. She it to school. Then she were her blue head band. Then they had a pick nick Erika where her blue headband.


I’m a truck driver by: Grant



The truck is busy at work. The tractor is like the good machines.  I am busy at work.  The tractor is busy at the field.  The tractor is not busy anymore.  THE TRACTOR BROKE DOWN A TOWTRUCK CAME AND HELPED ME. THE END

Sam's Book By: Ava

 Sam and his friend luck were rideing there bikes
Sam’s friend luck said can I ride your bike no said
Sam .Can I read your book no said am why said luck. Couse  it is new I just got it yesterday were
Did you get it at kohols .I  went there yesterday
I did not see you there yesterday. That’s couse I
left befor  you got there .I sole sum one there hoo
Looked like you .I was not there yesterday said
Sam. Look sam hoo is that I am sashae I’m the
New Quine of the town .but we never had a
Quine.  I don’t care said sashae we care.  no
One eles care’s. who care’s we do. stop said
Sam Im the one hoo started this so Im the one
Hoo is going to end it. lets be frindes said sam
And luck. Ok said sashae.  the next morning
They sole som one that they never sole before.
Im bob bob yes bob why do you have a problem

With that no ok. The end

How Bomy Changed by: Simon

Bomy steeled  Reies car. Soofey            got in trubl. She seid I did not do it  Bomey Did it. Bomy did you steel  reassis car no he problee iost it you have it in your HAND!!!!!!!  you are in big trurbl .25 years later bomey robd a banke a plees cot him he  poot him in jale. Bomeys bruthr and sister came and said       you can get out of Jale if you stop steeling. I wonte Steel inee more . That is what he said that’s what he did .he nether steeled agin .the end.

To Share By: Hanna

“Hi Beletu. How you doing?” Hanna asked.
“Grat” said Beletu.
Can I do your sowing maker ples ples ples”  I said ples .So what can I?” asked Hanna.

 Hanna it is time to go to bed”.Said Hidy
But Mom Beletu did not anser  my qwushtin yet” Said Hanna.
“ GO TO BED NOW” !!!!!! Said Hidy
Fine what ever you say.I will do for you so you will be happy”.Said Hanna



“If not tomareow I will get it. HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”. Said Hanna

Wednesday, November 26, 2014

The Mayor Fire By: Gage

There was a monster named fire. Why was his name Fire? Because  his head was on fire!Two years later he became mean to Fairy Man. Because he didn’t pay his rent. Then two minutes  later fire begin to walk down the road. Then fairy man said
“please please please please let me stay please!

“ Then Fire said fine but next time pay your rent” “Okey Dokey!” The end.

Monday, November 24, 2014

CHANGE OF PLANS By: Mrs. Hall

The class point party will be on the 11th!  Grandparents' Day is the 12th...  Please make sure you send in any treats for the party on the 11th or sooner!  Thanks for the great response! 


-Mrs. Hall

Friday, November 7, 2014

Spelling Words.... for November 14th:)

Focus:  Contractions

can’t
it’s
he’s
I’m
didn’t
who’s
she’s
aren’t
isn’t
haven’t
hadn’t
I’ll

Friday, October 31, 2014

Have a Great Weekend...

Keep a look out for more YouTube presentations.  All students will have published their books by Thanksgiving:)

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

The Go -Carts Race

Becca ,Jessi,  Micheal , Erica, and I  raced on go- carts .  We raced to my grandpas sand coarse  10  mile away. Micheal had  a  dirt  bike, Becca had a  Red go-cart,  Jessi had a Blue go-cart, Erica had a Yellow go-cart,  I had a Black go-cart with Red flames. We took off.  Becca  YELLED  MICHEAL  let us catch up! Micheal stopped now i,m IN the lead. i said then it was Jessi  next  Becca   after  Erica  last Micheal. Jessi got in front of me Micheal got in front of Becca,and Erica  Becca passis Micheal. Jessi won me second Becca 3 place micheal 4  place  Eica 5 place.

Thursday, October 2, 2014

Friday, August 29, 2014

Tuesday, August 26, 2014

A Small Moment By: Mrs. Hall

Stories happen to each of us daily, whether it is at a resturant, during recess, or during a drive home from school.  Each and everyday is a story, the only difference between what happens and what is written is whether it gets on paper.  Pretty simple? 

However, it is hard for our students to see that even the simplest of situations are worth telling.  Many times our kids think their stories need to be elaborate pieces of work.  The magic of writing is realizing that our mundain lives might serve as a lesson to others. 

Our first writing assignment is about a small moment.  Please be brainstorming with your child about a sweet, sad, funny, or memorable small moment in their lives.  Some examples:

A time at a resturant
Going to the drive-in
A scary storm
Buying a new pet
Going on a Bike Ride
Making Cookies 

The purpose of this writing assignment is to establish a concrete understanding of a story with a beginning, a middle, and an end and to tell something about themselves.  We are keeping it simple...

Rubric of "A Small Moment"

Wednesday, August 13, 2014

It Begins... By: Mrs. Hall

Welcome to another year of "Writing to Inspire".... These past two days have been just perfect.  We are busy learning how to be the best listeners we can be!  Today's lesson was accompanied by Interrupting Chicken by: David Ezra Stein.  Afterwards, we practiced what it means to be a great listener... wow.  We have quite a group of GREAT listeners....  as you can see...
Noelle listens as London reads... no "interrupting chickens" in this room!

Thursday, June 5, 2014

Farewell 2013-2014 School Year... Hello Summer...

Mrs. Hall's Class of 2013-2014
This year is a hard one to say good-bye to... This group of children is so special to me.  

Class of 13-14... You are going to rock 3rd grade.  I am so proud of each of you as you have developed as readers, writers, thinkers, mathematicians, and scientists.  You have explored, read, created, and read some more this year and life as a reader is just now taking off!  Keep reading this summer!  I'll see you on the 23rd!