Monday, February 6, 2012

Pumpkins,pumpkins By:Daisy

pumpkins,pumpkins,
jumpkins,jumpkins,

How you make me smile,
I think I'll stare a while!


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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2012 at 4:27 PM

    I love the details Daisy.Did you know

    pumpkins and jumpkins rym.

    Love princess Peach.

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  2. Miss HammanFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:29 AM

    Daisy,
    We love how you made your poem rhyme! We also noticed that you used white space to create a new stanza in your poem! Cool!
    Miss Hamman's Class

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 8, 2012 at 5:52 PM

    I agree with what Miss Hamman's class said. It also makes sense. Sometimes when a person tries to rhyme, it doesn't make sense.

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  4. sweet cakesFebruary 21, 2012 at 4:17 PM

    You did very nice on that.If I was writing this poem I would have never come up with pumpkins jumpkins!!!!!

    love

    sweet cakes

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