Once upon a time there lived a stepmother and evil stepbrothers And you can't for get the princess. They lived in a cottage. Then they found out they were going to the ROYAL pool!!
Priness Lilly had nothing to wear. But fairy Hadley, the fairy god mother, came to see her! And POOF!! She put her in the most pretty swiming sute! But fairy Hadley said you have to be back at midnight! If not the spell will be brocken! She did't like that!!!
So they went and the stepbrothers were sooooooooooo bad at swiming! But.... Lilly was NOT! Lilly won! They never saw the evil stepmother and the evil step brother again!!
And thats my story!!! THE END!!
I liked how you used another text to help you structure your story. Creative.
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